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Re: Honeytrip Sestina by Will Dockery Posted on: Fri, 20 Mar 2009 12:54:19 +0000 (UTC)

On Mar 17, 11:07=A0pm, Dale Houstman wrote:
> Orson Wells as CitizenCain wrote:
> > "Will Dockery" wrote:
>
>>>>> Honeytrip Sestina
>
> >>>>> Beads of sweat driving on 280,
> >>>>> thinking about a lonesome wildflower.
> >>>>> Cross country for this honeytrip,
> >>>>> going down to incant a shadowmusic,
> >>>>> joined on stage by her fiddle,
> >>>>> swear to god I really miss her.
>
> >>>>> She knows that I've missed her,
> >>>>> she drives alone on highway 280.
> >>>>> Her grandfather also played fiddle,
> >>>>> and grew gov'ment wildflowers.
> >>>>> Let him play his shadowmusic,
> >>>>> as we recall the honeytrip.
>
> >>>>> Backpacked, hitchhiked to honeytrip,
> >>>>> waterfall spray did mist her,
> >>>>> we formed a band to play shadowmusic.
> >>>>> Down in Salem, on Highway 280,
> >>>>> saw the sign of Project Wildflower,
> >>>>> a contra agent but plays good fiddle.
>
> >>>>> In the night sirens played fiddle,
> >>>>> rustling wail of honey trip.
> >>>>> Behind her ear was a wildflower,
> >>>>> I knew some day I would miss her.
> >>>>> Looking for tea olive on 280,
> >>>>> to play a few hours of shadowmusic.
>
> >>>>> Down a moonlit mile wild shadowmusic,
> >>>>> Bibb Mill burned as he played fiddle.
> >>>>> Westbound down Highway 280,
> >>>>> like a hound for the honeytrip,
> >>>>> after all her lies I still missed her,
> >>>>> blowing kises from a field of wildflowers.
>
> >>>>> Sang a melody like "Wildwood Flower",
> >>>>> she made it her own kind of shadowmusic.
> >>>>> When he stepped on stage we called him mister,
> >>>>> ghost of Sgt. Fury playing show fiddle.
> >>>>> The only crown prince of honey trip,
> >>>>> people parked and walked from 280.
>
> >>>>> Smell the wildflowers, surrounded by shadowmusic,
> >>>>> I miss her and her grandfather's fiddle.
> >>>>> Lonesome old honeytrip, in a hollow off 280.
>
> >>>>> -Will Dockery
>
> >>>>> --
> >>>>> "Twilight Girl" and other new poetry & music from Will
> >>>>> Dockery:http://www.myspace.com/willdockery
>
>>>> I missed this one earlier. It's got some interesting language,
> >>>> including the endwords "shadowmusic" and "280". I'm looking forward =
to
> >>>> hearing it.
> >>> =A0 a useless Rolling Stones cop
>
>> Okay, I went back here because I remembered this to be one of the many
> >> points you've accused several poets of "thievery", Dale... and see I
> >> was mistaken, you never actually called me a thief,
>
> > doesn't mean you aren't one.
>
> Actually - there's no doubt - he IS one. Him and his slightly less
> incompetent editor had to apologize for not only using my work without
> my permission

Well, I had your permission, which you gave me at least twice, to use
your poem "Her Lark Colony" in a music adaptation and the few excerpts
I used without your permission were being used to promote that... I
had no idea that you'd allow me to use your poem but would object to a
few quotes taken from Usenet, which I credited to your name, as well.
So sure, as soon as you complained I apologized, and in fact cancelled
the plan to use the poem you given me permission to use, as well.

While you're here, though, why not point out the place where you
imagine I "copped" from the Rolling Stones in the sestina? You never
got around to answering that.

--
"In The Hustlin' Bustlin' Moonlight" by Will Dockery:
http://www.facebook.com/album.php?aid=3D95087&id=3D620409362&l=3Dd3a038abd7



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