On The Highways and Bi-Ways God Built fanged:
> most insincerely,
>
> GodBuilt
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It doesn't rhyme
It doesn't have a foot
It has no figurative language
It has no allusions to shakespear whatsoever
It has no alliteration
It has no rhetorical flourish
It's not on topic
and thus
not constructive
re-flash your bios
there's an error between the chair and the computer
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Subjugate the rhyme and rawk with the rhythm
Only got one line to balk all the schizm
SteepleJack Beer
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